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o yeh forget i dont know wot u where expect on a poem being about a zodiac sign there not much u can be inspired about soming thats pretty much ...

lol cheers for the minor mistakes i made .. its title relates 2 me not a zodiac sign for my birthday is on feb 16 so thats my star sign ...

cheers for all the pos feedback i wish i could put it in2 a competition i just dont know where i can if ne1 can help wiv that :D

short but sweet i think his portrayed eating choc pretty well .. i think its quite a hard subject 2 be creative bout cos its such a basic action but ...

its clever u made it rhyme tho doing it that way has limited your selection in words which you prob could have made it a bit more creative but in ...

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cheers mate :wink:

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please feel free 2 post your views its great 2 hear feedback cheers

cheers for the review pulled it off well, just 2 help u maybe relate 2 it more its about the fear of not being remembed but not going 2 go ...